A moment
A moment in my life,
A moment so miniscule,
that it could be easily overlooked,
with a shrug of the shoulders,
like it never existed,
never happened,
but…
The moment does not stare at me,
does not hold me in a vise-like grip,
it sometimes manages to waft in,
slow and seductive,
I manage to shake it away easily,
with almost no-effort,
but…
For days the thoughts don’t drift,
the concious does not let go,
not even for a second,
life gains attention,
moments of the present overtaking,
what happened so long ago,
but…
No longer is there a longing,
breathing comes naturally,
in and out, in and out,
there is no pressure to to be happy,
the moment is all but forgotten,
as I peep into the eyes of someone familiar,
but…
Surely it has been more than a few lifetimes,
since the moment came to haunt me,
seems like so long ago,
I must have gotten over it,
I decide triumphantly,ready to party,
but…
But right this moment,
it is different,t
here is just that moment and no others, not the ones before,
not the ones after,
why is it that how many ever times
I have tried to burn it,
it is always there – a but!
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Inspired form the lines,
“ek chota sa lamha hain jo khatm nahi hotha, main laakh jalaata hoon wo bhasm nahi hotha”
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February 14, 2008 at 6:22 am
I don’t know whats going on in your mind right now…but…
“Just take things easy…Chill maar !”
-priya
http://pricelessjunk.wordpress.com/
February 17, 2008 at 2:00 pm
lol yeah i have no clue what your talking about , but hey that s poetry right ?
anyway take in a deeeeeep breath and try leaving it out …slowlyyyyyyyyyyyy..
my principle’s advice
February 18, 2008 at 1:36 pm
You write really good poems, you know you can write a couple and publish them!
Keep up the good work, in fact the great work! I really appreciate your talent
February 18, 2008 at 4:39 pm
@priya
Thanks duh..
Positive reinforcement!!
@ manasa
deep breath??
for what?? LOL
@ niveditha
Gee…
Thanks a ton!!
February 18, 2008 at 5:10 pm
chungola bumbola….hehehe..
February 19, 2008 at 4:17 am
@ sujanya
Ayya…
What do I do with people like you?? God bless me.. :S
February 19, 2008 at 9:52 am
Sibling rivalry on the comments section of a really nice poem?
February 19, 2008 at 12:32 pm
@ poorna
Yup…
Not much can be said about her beautiful comment can there??
February 23, 2008 at 6:49 pm
Lol chumma thought i will quote these famous lines , thats all !
February 28, 2008 at 10:52 am
love it =)
fix the ‘concious’ typo =P
write more!
and often!
February 28, 2008 at 11:08 am
oh btw, i linked to your blog
February 29, 2008 at 10:35 am
Fantastic poem!!! Amazing!!! Keep going pratty!!!
February 29, 2008 at 3:55 pm
@ aditi and kadambari
thanks a ton.
March 17, 2008 at 4:07 am
jungle,bungle tumble bubble rubble ,,,,,,,, can u give something rhyming freak!!!!!!
March 17, 2008 at 2:56 pm
I cannot write poems that rhyme..
And I dont find the necessity to!!
Hmph!!
March 28, 2008 at 3:35 pm
I’d really like 2 meet Sujanya!!!
March 29, 2008 at 5:47 pm
Gah!!
She’s one stupid bum!!
*straight face*